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Part of USS Constellation: Loneliness is Killing and Bravo Fleet: Nightfall

Loneliness is Killing – 4

Predator-class Carrier Wreckage
April 2402
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Surrounded by the silent dark of the abandoned Kazon ship, Chief Science Officer Yuulik was reminded how much she used to enjoy zero-gravity training. The universe shrunk down to a pinpoint, and she was finally alone with her expansive thoughts.

The snug fit of the environmental suit was like a hug to her nervous system—without any of the messy emotional attachments. Pausing for her mag boots to connect to the deck meant she could walk at a pace of her own choosing. The best part was the autonomy to turn her communications transceiver on and off. Make the bleating all shut up.

On this day, Yuulik was approaching a computer core in the depths of a derelict Predator-class carrier. That meant she didn’t have the luxury of covering her ears. With no reactor to power the vessel, the only light source came from the headlamp on Yuulik’s environmental suit and those of her away team: First Officer Calumn, Operations Chief Nune, Security Officer Jurij and Doctor Nelli. Given that Nelli’s body plan wasn’t even vaguely humanoid, they wore a life support belt instead with a personal forcefield.

As if Captain Taes was whispering right in Yuulik’s ear, she said, “Report?” from the relative comfort of Constellation’s bridge.

“Based on the tachyon decay,” Yuulik said, interpreting the readings on her tricorder, “I guarantee this ship has been lost in Understpace for decades.”

Before all the apertures were opened last year?” Taes asked. Silently, Yuulik agreed that that would be the simplest explanation for how a Kazon carrier would have entered Underspace.

But what Yuulik said was, “Didn’t you hear me, captain? I said decades ago. The Turei always warned us that we would become a ghost ship like this if we invaded Underspace without their supervision.”

Two metres ahead of Yuulik, Nune was crouched beside a hexagonal tower they had deduced to be the computer core. He looked up from the micro field generator he was wiring to the tower’s base. When he looked at her, the bright light from his headlamp momentarily dazzled her eyes. Yuulik blinked hard several times. He stunned her, just like his impersonal responses had done to her in the observation lounge that morning.

Could the Turei have ejected these broken vessels from Underspace?” Nune asked over their comms.

Or a natural process? A cyclical cleansing of Underspace?” Nelli proposed. With bright spots across her vision, Yuulik couldn’t see where Nelli had lumbered off to.

Until her vision returned to normal, Yuulik tried to remember: when was the last time Nune had offered to help her solve a mystery? Four months ago? His brief sprint of inspiration for refining the programming of her failed A500 synth, Addie? When was the last time Nune had mentioned his failing relationship with Laken? Three months ago? Were those two even still dating?

Commander Calumn’s measured cadence came over her helmet comms. He sounded even more confident than Yuulik had been a moment ago, and Yuulik had been bluffing her way through half her affectation.

Our orders from command are to forge alliances. We need friends who can repel the Vaadwaur Supremacy. The Kazon will be apoplectic about the Vaadwaur ransacking one of their ships and encroaching on their territory,” Calumn said. Stepping into Yuulik’s field of vision, Calumn clapped Nune on the shoulder and took one of the wires to plug it into another insert higher on the computer core.

Calumn bottom-lined it for them, saying, “So that means it was the Vaadwaur who attacked the Kazon. That is the fact now. Repeat it. Remember it. You’ll be surprised how quickly it becomes your own personal truth.

From her moral high tower of Constellation, Taes hemmed and hawed, murmuring, “I don’t– I’m not sure if that’s exactly–

A light flickered on Yuulik’s gauntlet. As she considered it, she saw Nune was attempting to open a private communications channel with her. He made no visible attempt to catch Yuulik’s attention. To all other eyes around the darkened compartment, Nune was securing the adaptive interface link to the computer core.

By the time Taes started talking about integrity and the prime directive, Yuulik muted the group channel. With another stab at her gauntlet, she accepted Nune’s private hail.

Yuulik, what happened in the observation lounge,” he asked. And still, he didn’t look up from his ministrations. “What was that?

“It was nothing,” Yuulik responded, and she looked right at him. “It was fine. We’re on an away mission, dummy.”

Nune huffed in the way people often did when they said her name. Annoyed.

That wasn’t nothing,” he said. “Don’t tell Kellin or Elbon, but you’re my best friend! What did I do, Yuulik?

“You did nothing. You said nothing,” Yuulik spat. She saw the spittle hit her face plate. “You don’t talk to me the way you used to. I miss you! At our current rate, we’re on track to have only seventy-four more meaningful conversations in our joint life-span.”

Don’t do that,” Nune said, quieter. “Don’t shut me out and then say you miss me.

“Seventy-four!” Yuulik shrieked and slapped her gauntlet like she was putting out a fire, closing the channel.

As she reconnected to the away team’s comms channel, Nelli said, “This isn’t a Kazon ship.

“Don’t call me dumb,” Yuulik protested.

Pardon me?” Nelli replied. “Was there interference in the signal?

“This looks exactly like a Kazon ship,” Yuulik protested some more.

That is because it is exactly like a Kazon ship,” Nelli said. The meaning behind her choice of emphasis was unclear, given the monotone speech pattern of their vocoder. “From the skeletal remains I located… I need further examination to reach clarity. Cross-checking with Constellation’s computer found too many inconsistencies with the Kazon. With sixty-two percent reliability, the remains are–

Nelli’s voice was drowned out over the open comms channel by the red alert klaxon sounding on Constellation’s bridge.

Away team, First Maje Vuldu has caught up with us, and he’s not alone,” Taes warned them. “Five raiders and two carriers have dropped out of warp. One just launched a shuttle, heading in your direction.

Gruffly, Jurij cut in, “All right, everyone move away from the exterior hull. No last looks. No one mores. No complaints. Just move.

Jurij was already in motion. Yuulik couldn’t even discern from what shadow he had sprung from. Timed with each of his proclamations, Jurij grabbed Nelli, Nune, and Yuulik between his three arms and dragged them towards an open doorframe. Without a clear view of the compartment or her team members, Yuulik was disoriented and dizzy from the sudden movement.

Yuulik considered running; she really thought about it; she wanted to do it. But the lock-and-release of her mag boots made it nigh impossible. Running to keep up with Jurij felt like running through the ocean. Nune also put his arm around her, pulling her along with the extra centimetres his legs allowed. She hardly knew which way lay safety without them dragging her along.

We can’t miss this opportunity,” Taes said over the comms. Her timbre was formal, and Yuulik could hear a hitch in her breathing. It usually happened when Taes thought with her fourth pip rather than her years of scientific training.

Taes gave the order: “Cooperate with the Kazon. We’ve transmitted our sensor readings to every ship. We’ll negotiate to persuade them those abandoned ships had nothing to do with Starfleet. They were catapulted out of Underspace. Do what you can to convince them the Vaadwaur are our common enemy.

And then Taes asked, “What?” to a bridge officer whose voice wasn’t quite picked up by the receiver. “What do you mean they’re not on course with a shuttle bay?

Yuulik only saw a glimpse of the impact through her peripheral vision.  The piercing nose of the shuttle smashed through the outer hull, and became wedged halfway into the large computer centre. Without artificial gravity to fight against or atmosphere to convey the sound of the crash, it was underwhelming. It hardly seemed worth the awkward running.

Nune must have felt the same. Despite the pointed shuttle that had smashed through the outer hull, Nune was power-walking back to the equipment he’d left attached to the computer core. Yuulik followed after him. She snapped her tricorder into its indenture on her suit and then clicked off the safety on her phaser pistol.

Catching up with Nune, Yuulik quickly assessed the readouts on the adaptive interface link.

“Why is this so slow?” Yuulik blurted at Nune over the comms. “Is this a mark four? We have mark elevens in the cargo bay!”

Nune swiped at the controls and replied, “We can’t risk them getting their hands the mark elevens.

Them started jumping out of the shuttle’s forward hatch in pressure suits: one Kazon and then two and then six. Each of them raised their weapons, tracking every member of the Starfleet away mission.

Yuulik heard a chime in her ear as one of the Kazon hailed them. She regretted opening the channel.

Stop what you’re doing!” the Kazon shouted.

Eat glass, you ungrateful parasite!” Yuulik shouted right back at him over the comms. “This broken-down wreck bested you, so we’re trying to discover where it came from.

Nune slowly stood from his crouch over the equipment, rising to his full height. He assumed a squared-off posture, hovering his hand over his phaser. Yuulik matched Nune’s power stance to the best of her ability as Jurij and Calumn slowly, very slowly, edged in to flank them. Nelli remained out of sight.

Yeah! Jerk!” Nune growled over the comms, seemingly following her lead. “We want to help you! Find out who’s coming for you!

The group of Kazon continued to track the movement of the away team, keeping their emitters aimed at each one of them. None of Kazon said anything for an excruciating ten seconds. One Kazon twitched, and Jurij’s three arms twitched back.

You can repair the navigational computer?” the lead Kazon asked.

Nune stepped in front of Calumn, snapping, “That’s what I just fuckin’ said, isn’t it?”

The lead Kazon lowered his phaser.

You may proceed. Slowly.

Yuulik tapped the field generator with the toe of her boot.

“Uh, slowly is guaranteed.”

Comments

  • FrameProfile Photo

    The power of great storytelling is balancing your character development with the pressure of the drama you're injecting - not to mention the outside pressure of the plot that's developing around the characters with it's own variable pressure. Finding a strong middle ground for all of those cylinders to work effectively together isn't easy, but you did a great job weaving it all together and then pulling it tight right near the end. The shuttle crashing and then the standoff was fun to read and fun to imagine in my head. Thankfully, everyone stands down a little....and we're left to wonder what happens next. With both the character drama and the plot drama - it could go anywhere!

    April 9, 2025
  • FrameProfile Photo

    This was such a neurotypical chapter from Yuulik, huh, complete with considerations of the sensory delights of being in zero-g and wearing an EV suit. "Eat glass, you ungrateful parasite" was a line that had me chortling into my coffee; I love the willingness of your characters - not just Yuulik - to speak so much more like people than the staid Starfleet officers (see also Nune calling the Kazon jerks as he insists he's trying to help). I am sooo intrigued by seeing how Calumn continues to line up with the crew; I think he's going to continue as a great foil for Taes, but also Yuulik, a pretty invaluable addition of a new perspective/conflict type to round out the Constellation's ongoing internal arcs. Great stuff!

    April 10, 2025
  • FrameProfile Photo

    Ah man, the build-up of adventure is just a joy to read here. Also, you've really captured the bad-guy energy that the Kazon were back in Voyager - also loving the use of their ramming shuttle! Yuulik needs her own TV show - she really got raw about her homeworld in the last story when the news from the AQ/BQ was shared. That really affected her and that has continued here on the salvage operation. She was damn snappy with those Kazons (I wish Janeway had more Yuulik vibes when she dealt with the Kazon) and you tell them girl! I agree with Cath about Nune - such a stand-on-the-sidelines and chant something that is mildly rude to get some point across. Again, you do you Nune! haha!

    April 10, 2025
  • FrameProfile Photo

    I loved the description of being in a spacesuit at the start. The micro-universe one can inhabit if one turns off comms and just floats for a bit. Reading that Yuulik enjoys a hug, without the messy emotional baggage, isn't surprising. It's a snug comfort feeling thing, isn't it? And then we get back to Emotional Yuulik. Again, she doesn't do things by half. Swing between defensive and reaching out with Nune was wild whiplash. Which I guess was the point. She's all over the place. And then the Kazon have arrived! I was honestly expecting more conflict with them, but hey, being told 'Eat glass, you ungrateful parasite' would probably cause me to stop and reconsider my options just a touch as well. Fighting in a vacuum is bad. Fighting crazy people in a vacuum is worse.

    April 11, 2025
  • FrameProfile Photo

    The brief exchange of Taes asking a question-in-a-question, with Yuulik recognizing that she was doing so but then answering only the surface question anyway might be my favorite part of this chapter. That, and the understated shuttle crash, properly alarming thanks to the clever set-up of Taes's concerned aside, and also subtly creepy in how underwhelming it was. Space! It's a creepy place to be, sometimes! I also loved Jurij's sharp efficiency as a security officer, and making 100% practical use of those three arms. Oh, OH! And "It usually happened when Taes thought with her fourth pip rather than her years of scientific training." What a killer line. Love the phrasing. Love the insight into both Yuulik and Taes.

    April 12, 2025